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2 depressing poems by ~myrina:iconmyrina:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Dark


Falling

I am falling
Into the endless night
Of darkness.
Things rush by me as I fall,
A wilted flower,
A ruined child’s toy,
Still I fall forever

I am falling,
Not knowing where;
Or when;
Or why.
All I know is the darkness,
And the shadows.
Still I fall forever.

I am falling,
I open my hand,
Eyes straining in the black light,
My palm is streaked with blood.
I recoil, clench my fist hard,
With blood soaked fingers.
And still I fall forever.

I am falling,
My soul – like a caged bird,
But no bars to hold me,
No locks to keep me.
I must endure the pain,
Of eternal captivity.
And still, I fall forever..

Dying Soul

As I crouch here on the floor,
Tears streak my face as I cry,
I feel like I’ve been here before,
My heart is shattered, soon to die.

In the darkened room I shy,
Away from shadows on the wall,
Any word I speak becomes a lie,
Lies that pierce my very soul.

I whirl around to see myself,
Staring with huge and frightened eyes,
The wide-eyed girl, the frightened whelp,
The one who’s soon to break and die.

I cry out from the pain,
The pain from deep within my soul,
That I cannot seem to reign,
Soon it will take its toll.

My soul is torn and broken,
This I know as on the floor I lie,
That the Dark Lord now has spoken,
He has come for when I die.
©2003-2010 ~myrina
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Author's Comments

These are poems i wrote when i was feeling particularly in the mood to write something depressing. i wasnt feeling that happy...
these are very dark and emotional. the first one is kinda about... well i don't really know. kinda internal turmoil. but those arent the right words... oh well.
the second one is about someone who is driven to the edge of madness because they're so depressed and they think their soul is dying. then they kinda become weird and think they're dead or something. i couldnt get the rhyming and rythmn right so it will sound a bit weird... oh well. please enjoy the depressingness :P

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~myrina Aug 29, 2003, 7:40:21 PM
oops sry i didnt mean it all to be underlined ;;-_-

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Evilness will previal over good in the final battle of Armageddon.
MWAHAHAHA!
that is all.
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~dragons-spirit Nov 26, 2005, 5:20:04 PM
very good alot of thought went ito this i can see dont worry about it being underlined doesnt matter:) a fav for sure
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~DaT bUiLDer iS So dAmN seXy~
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~RebelRockerGirl Aug 28, 2007, 4:37:50 AM
WOW!!! Well done!!! I like both of 'em!!! Expecially Dying Soul!!! They're REALLY expressive!!!

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"Honey, I'm too tired to slap you. Bash your face up against my palm."
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~shallowpelt Nov 16, 2007, 11:51:27 PM
This is so beautiful....I love both, but I love the dying soul one the best because it seems to reach out to me...though both were still magnificant!

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mew?
"If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is, because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn't be. And what it wouldn't be, it would. You see?"- Alice (Alice in Wonderland)
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~evillittledevil Mar 12, 2008, 2:19:33 PM
depressing i like that
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Mood: Adoration ~soul-rose Jul 2, 2008, 10:28:11 PM
O.O That is amazing. I just... feel like these two poems say so much... I can't discribe it. It's not just depression... but it's also a feeling of understanding. Everyone is depressed. Everyone gets depressed. These two poems say so much about everything in life. You did an awesome job. I love it.
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~Kerrybearisme Dec 9, 2008, 2:26:39 PM
I like Drying Soul the most.:heart:
+Favv.
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~xmonkeygalx Jan 7, 2009, 11:37:24 AM
i like t he second one most!!!!

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~shallow-GuRl Apr 4, 2009, 4:30:55 AM
thats really nice,i like it =]..
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